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Review by DMLANGEL1101 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)
Very nicely penned. I especially like over our dark knots.
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Review by DMLANGEL1101 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Excellent suggestions. Thanks.
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Review by DMLANGEL1101 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)
Good story and interesting, but it feels a little rushed. Perhaps a stop in one location for awhile and more showing so that the reader can make sense of the whole universe distortion and
the planet you and your crew landed on. The planets, animals, landscape and more discussion with the creatures on it, would be good. KEEP GOING! Interesting overall though.
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Review by DMLANGEL1101 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)
Amen to that, brother! Bless them one and all. Nicely said. Keep writing.
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