This review is my opinion, and should be viewed as such.
I enjoyed immensely your story. I don't by choice, read fantasy, but I watch some on TV (I'm peculiar like that).
Hooks: The title is apt, and the opening line perfect (indeed, I did not get it) but saw it after the fact. Great work.
Overall Impression: Excellent, easy to read, the style fits the genre, beautifully done. It was hard to read in this font and size, I'm not sure if this is changeable, but 1.5 spacing would've made it easier to read.
Characters & Plot: Your characters and plot were believable, and I especially loved the cat.
Well done on a brilliant piece of work. I hope to attain such a standard. All the best for future writings.
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