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Review of Fairy Homes  
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
This is really sweet, and definitely paints a fantastic picture. I love the idea of this fairy home in your garden!

Really quick, there were a couple of spots that pulled me out of the reading:

1) a back - should be aback, because with the article, it looks like you are referring to an actual back, of someone or something.
2) "The beauty the radiance" - a comma in this line would help the flow, I think
3) "The fairies home" - I suggest including the apostrophe for possession, because otherwise this is confusing. (The fairies' home)
4) Why every other night, and not simply every night?

It is a really adorable poem, thank you for sharing it!
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