Wow! I read the description of this short story and expected something good, but you have created something great right here! This is such an intruiging story that I couldn't unglue myself from the computer. I wasn't too sure about the dream part at once, what was she chosen for? But if it was supposed to reamin a mystery than you did a gret job! Fantastic work, keep writing.
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