I did not go onto writing.com to read poems, it is not what i read normally, but this was recommended to me anyway so here i am.
I like this one, it does not rime, which, for some reason, made it harder for me to find a flow in the text, despite that i was pulled along by the beutiful simplistic way of describing the ascent from earth.
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