Excellent! The mystery in the beginning making people think it is a lover that has given you a gift. The lover that made your heart beat wildly every time he is near. Then at the end you reveal this lover as your five year old son. Very endearing and loving. A mother's excitement from a gift from their child. I loved it. Keep Writing.
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