Wonderful opening chapter! It's action-loaded and highly emotional, establishing a clear conflict and giving a compelling protagonist with his inner struggles. The reader is left wanting for more – just what is this creature, what happened to Kyron's team, and can he overcome this new threat? Well done.
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