Gary
what a nice poem and so heart felt. It is full of wonder and amazement. As a mother and now a grandmaother you discribed childhood of a toddler so perfectly and so simply .YOur poem was joy to read. Dawn
I liked all of it except the first line, it was a tougue twister( for me ) and I had to re read it three times to make it flow the way the writter intended it too
then to be honest I am not much into poetry so maybeI do not know how poetry is written.Is poetry suppose to flow or is it suppose to be like this?
Really, it is warm and beautiful. I simpy did not care for the way it began
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