Although not usually a fan of this genre of fiction I found myself gripped by this piece. Well done Sir. From time to time the words flow with less fluidity than one would perhaps want, but apart from that I found this a very enjoyable piece. I suggest reading one's work aloud, a very helpful part of the process, will aid with regard to the fluidity.
Otherwise, well done.
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