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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Almost! Incredibly descriptive and interesting, it definetly catches your eye and makes you want to read it. It's very laidback on how you show the "main character's" feelings. The peppermint stinging her mouth was ingenious by the way, since not many writers can write about something so incredibly common and make it so interesting and fun! On the negitive side however, we never get to know more about this annoynmous(sp?) character, and she sounds interesting, but this is a "one shot" sort of thing. But, thats also a plus because it leaves you in suspense! Just who is her admirer? And what more could we learn? Nice job!
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