Xander's (darvathian) Reviews

Xander

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16 Public Reviews Given

16 Total Reviews Given

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#3482575

Review of Shadows

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Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

This is the only piece that I have ever graded a five on.Very good work.

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#3482359

Review of Dark Vows

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (2.5)

What i misunderstand is the point in this writing.Although impressive I felt a certain lack of reason.

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#3353077

Review of Is This What Love Is?

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)

First in and love are not spaced,this is a good piece at times it seems forceful but altogether well done.Thank you for your time.

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#3338385

Review of Temptation

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (2.0)

This is my rating only because you said this is a work in progress.Thank you for your time.

5

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#3338261

Review of At Night...

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (2.0)

You have potential,but you need to think over your writing to see if that is what you really want to see people read.

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#3337420

Review of Little Children

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Excellent job very good job this is an piece of literary genius,well done.

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#3337414

Review of Revenge

Review by Xander

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (2.0)

Good but, this sounds like some of it is forced, let it come to you naturally.