Hi Steph I came across this story while random reviewing.
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Clarity: A good title that describes the contents of this article well.
Writing style: Nature Opinion. Article.
Are all 3 genres listed? Only two are listed. Did you know by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Nicely structured and formatted, making it easy for the reader.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue is appropriate for the speaker.
My favorite line: --- The motion of rain is the change we know will eventually come---
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written article focusing on some of the effects that rain can bring with it
I really like the first line 'Comfort comes from the most irrevocable things.'
No doubt the rain does have a mystical kind of magic effect. It is raining right here right now. The sounds and effects can indeed be hypnotic. This article has described some of those effects well.
A delightful ending line. 'April showers bring May flowers.'
Steph thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: Keep up the good work.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi ~Lifelessons~ I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Are all 3 genres listed? I only see 2. by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice structure that is easy on the reader.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Appropriate dialogue.
My favorite line: I was dreaming of a White Christmas!!
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: It sounds like you had a great time with your family at Christmas. Back at your hometown. Indeed, Christmas is a most memorable holiday, especially when you're a kid. This tale has made me homesick to go back in time.
~Lifelessons~thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
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SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
My 2 cent worth is only one opinion. Overall impressions: An interesting how to article. Written short and simple, just the way the modern reader likes it. A common subject that I'm sure many, many people will relate to.
What if you want to install the shortcut not as an app? I just wonder if apps take up more storage.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can see and this Informational article.
Muttley thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: The first winter snow is an enchanted time that always takes me back to my childhood.
This delightful poem has done just that.
An 11 line free verse style poem with a random Rhyming Pattern that gives a realistic flow to this delightful work.
Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of snow covering the ground. A man not able to make it to work. Eating his breakfast of bacon and eggs, while the cat ignores him as well as the wind chimes.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with this enchanted poem.
JCosmos thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
2026 Hi Jatog the Green I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem:"Butterfly Ballet" by Jatog the Green
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A forty line Anapestic Tetrameter poem using five prompt phrases. It appears you met all the prompt requirements well in this entertaining poem. This tale seemed to catch my attention best after fried chicken. The poem flowed with the best rhythm.
Anapestic tetrameter is a poetic meter consisting of four anaspestic feet per line, creating a fast galloping or light hearted rhythm. An anapest makes the line sound like "da- da- Dum, da da Dum, Da da Dum, da da Dum." It is commonly used in narrative poetry, Humor and children's literature. The Night Before Christmas is a good example.
Well, I have learned something new anyway.
Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a peaceful soul enjoying a night of solitude. A knock on the door turns his world upside down.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems with the mechanics of this entertaining work. I hope you won the contest.
Jatog the Green thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
Hi Samuel I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Treatment" by Samuel My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well worded and very realistic autobiographical type article.
Indeed, it does sound like you have hit a low spot. As the tides of time move on, you will realize that it is those Low points that actually make us stronger and mold us into the person we become. Learn from your mistakes and hold your faith and in no time you will be able to look back and laugh about that time. Human nature is to learn by trial and error.
Even though in those low points we feel so alone, In time you will find that there are many that have been in similar or even worse experience's and still prevailed . Yours sounds like an interesting tale that I'm sure many would be interesting in hearing, and it would probably even help some to avoid some of the mistakes that you might have made.
Samuel thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: Take your time and write your story. Write other stories while you're at it. Putting it on paper helps you to move on and find that path that is yours.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: An eight line free verse style poem proclaiming a love and passion for poetry.
Poetry is a magic art that can be written by one person and interpreted 100 different ways by 100 different people. In these modern times, many people would think that poetry was an ancient art. However, they don't recognize that it still surrounds us. In most every type of communication, correspondence and modern language, you will find roots tied to this art. In every song you hear, in every sentence you read. If one opens their creative mind, they will find poetry.
Artistic Voice and Imagery: I like this simple poem that has got this reader's mind spending in creativity.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with this delightful work.
Brandiwyn thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A Thirty-four line free verse poem focusing on the effects of the coronavirus and that infamous year of 2020 when time stopped.
Written in a poetic form, however, anyone who lived through that year will definitely understand what you mean. Now that it has been a while, you don't hear much about that year as everyone moves on with life and tries to forget that unforgettable year.
Artistic Voice and Imagery: A very emotional poem as most all of us lost someone in that pandemic. Personally, I would love to be able to find what history will reveal about that awful time and how it was started.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with this emotional poem.
Anni thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
Hi s. nagarajan I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Clarity: Seems to be a good title for this book review.
Writing style: Book review article.
Are all 3 genres listed? Only two are listed. By listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialogue seems appropriate for the speaker. My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Sounds like a very informational and inspirational book. I hope the guy don't turn into a cult leader.
A happy life for 100 years. Sounds sort of like a dream.
s. nagarajan thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: Keep up the good work.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi madhuri I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Clarity: A good title for this informational article.
Writing style: Educational career article.
Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed. by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A good structure that does make it easy for the reader. My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:
Seems to be a well written and very informational article about financial risk management and possibly making that your career. Well structured. I like the what and why subtitles.
Sounds like I need to get the e-mail address for Imperial and apply for a job. Here in the states it seems like the ones making the most are the universities. There fees for degrees in fields that aren't hiring leaves their students in debt for half their working life.
madhuri thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: Keep up the good work.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A Fifteen line free verse style poem emphasizing on a few facts in poetic form. I think this one's my favorite. Stepping -
on an
autumn leaf,
leaves behind a
pleasant crunch.
I like this simple artistic poem.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with this delightful poem.
Borb thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
Hi Spud I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Are all 3 genres listed? Did you know that by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Well structured, making it easy for the reader.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.
My favorite line: ---"I am the Pumpkin King," the performer said. They spit seeds all over the stage. How unhygienic, Edward had expected candidates to be more professional.---
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good opening that introduces the story-line of this entertaining, twisted tale.
Short and to the point, in a few words, just the way today's modern reader likes things. Written sort of like a screenplay. I like the ending. He did not take rejection well.
Spudthank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions:
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi Shirley I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Are all 3 genres listed? Great, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice structure and format.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Good dialog that does seem appropriate for its speaker.
My favorite line: --- Outside, thousand-foot-high mountains of red sand rose from the flat, salt plains of ancient sea beds. It was a cruel land, which can cast a spell on those who live there.---
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good opening introducing the story-line for this creative tale. I like the fairy tale, witchy theme. Those witches can be tricky.
A well written, delightful and entertaining tale. The ending with Leonard and his wife got me a little confused.
Shirleythank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: Write on!
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi again THANKFUL SONALI Get Well Ken I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
My impressions of:"Heist at Hogwarts" by THANKFUL SONALI Get Well Ken
Clarity: A good, catchy title for this Hogwarts tale.
Writing style: Fanfiction, comedy, drama.
Are all 3 genres listed? Great, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A wonderful structure, I like the font, it fits this tale great. The line spacing is perfect.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Good dialog that is appropriate for its speaker.
My favorite line: ---"Still the same old arrogant Potter, I see. Ask politely."---
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:
A good opening that catches my attention well and makes me want to know more. Wonderful descriptions that take me right there to Hogwarts beside Harry and Hermione.
A delightful, humorous tale that has gave this reader a good 😂laugh.
"Well - it's silly - but I just wanted to say - I didn't steal it, I was framed!"
I really like the ending.
THANKFUL SONALI Get Well Ken thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions:
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi again Sumojo I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Are all 3 genres listed? by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A great structure that makes it very easy for the reader.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? A great job with the dialogue. I know from experience all dialogue is difficult.
My favorite line: I’m suffering from afterlife insomnia. There’s just no rest to be had. I’m feeling very wraithlike.
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:
A great opening for this entertaining tales. Great dialogue. I like the down under slang.
I like the bold font to distinguish the speaker. A realistic tone that helps the reader to relate with this ghostly tale. Casper needs a lady ghost friend.
I like the Witch Doctor ending.
Sumojothank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions:
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A sixteen line free verse form poem written in the style of a romance letter. An emotional letter written on paper because it would appear that the words orally did not have meaning to the reciprocate.
Humans are mysterious beings and it is very hard to know what is going on in the mind of another.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find in this entertaining work.
SanguineAngel thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
Hi Glabal News I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Clarity: A good title that describes the content of this article well.
Writing style: Current Events. Environmental News. Article.
Are all 3 genres listed? Only one listed. by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured and formatted.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: An entertaining and educational article about recycling plastics and what they do to our environment. It sounds like the 63 students are on the right path for the future to try to clean up our environment a little.
Humans do seem to be a selfish species, and especially on the Earth that supports them. We often take things for granted and more often, just don't think. Our environment has begun to speak to us about that.
Glabal News thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: Keep up the good work.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A deep and moving poem, very emotional about losing a father figure.
Eighteen emotional lines in this strong free verse style poem.
Often we never realize how much we depend on someone until it's too late and they have departed. The wheels of time turn and they stay with us. Only they're unable to help us as before and we can't depend on their loyal advice like we once did.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find in this strong and emotional poem.
BUSYBEE thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A twenty-one line free verse poem consisting of seven three line stanzas focusing on choices.
Choices are often presented to us, kind of like that old cartoon with an Angel on one shoulder and a devil on the other, each trying to influence your choice.
Artistic Voice and Imagery: I think this is my favorite line.
" The shadows relentlessly try to drive a wedge into the caring heart. "
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find in this entertaining poem.
cheshire thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On! Take time to smell the roses God Bless!
Hi Sodier_Mike I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Clarity: A good title. A good image next to the title that actually describes the contents of this sci-fi adventure better.
Writing style: Sci-fi, adventure, drama.
Are all 3 genres listed? Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A great structure that does make it easier for the reader
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? A great job on the dialogue, which does sound specific for its speaker.
My favorite line:---"It takes quite a while to travel eighty-three million miles, you know."---
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good casual opening introducing Samuel and the setting for the storyline. Well written in a modern fashion that gives this story a realistic tone.
This entertaining tale is so believable, I'm gonna have to research some of these facts.
A nice mellow ending.
It looks like you met the prompt requirements well, I hope you won.
Sodier_Mike thank you for sharing this entertaining tale, it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions:Consider adding some action or unexpected twist into the storyline and maybe a more jagged ending. Just my 2 cents.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi R I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Clarity: A good title that describes the contents of this article well.
Writing style: Personal emotional experience.
Are all 3 genres listed? Great, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure and format is fairly easy for the reader. A bit more line spacing and blank lines between longer paragraphs would make it easier for those of us with weak eyes.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem appropriate for the speaker.
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:
A well written, strong and emotional article describing the grief of a lost loved one.
The memories of lost friends and loved ones that passed before us stay with us through our lives and make us in to the person we become.
We can use those memories to help us build strong, realistic characters in our writing. It helps with the mourning process to try and bring these memories and characters to life on paper.
R thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: Use these memories and emotions in future works of writing.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi again Jay O'Toole I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Clarity: A nice title. However, it could describe the contents of this chapter better.
Writing style: Children's fantasy drama.
Are all 3 genres listed? Indeed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Nicely structured, making it easy for the reader.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? A good job with the dialogue that does seem to be specific for the speaker.
My favorite line:---"What gave you the idea that making a proposal to a perfect stranger was even slightly acceptable?"---
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice opening that introduced the characters and give hints to the storyline. Quest and Lady are both described well, building a realistic picture of them for the reader.
A new job lifts Quest's spirits and builds his confidence. Quest keeps his focus on persuading Lady to marry him. A delightful tale, however it seems to get a bit long winded in the middle.
A nice happy ending. Quest and Lady live happily forever.
Jay O'Toole thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: Consider a good edit, keeping in mind that the modern audience in this fast paced world are programmed to hurry and prefer short, straight to the point stories.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi azrael2915 I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Are all 3 genres listed? Only one given. by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure and format are easy for the reader.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialogue does seem appropriate for the speaker.
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: An interesting opening that does catch the reader's attention making him want to know more.
A creative idea for this different style of tale.
azrael2915 thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions: A good proofreading and edit never hurts.
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
Hi Spud I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.
Are all 3 genres listed? Great, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.
Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice structure that does make it easy on the reader.
Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? A good job on the dialogue that is appropriate for the speaker.
My favorite line:---"Aw, bless," the wood carver said. "I'm afraid it's not that simple, princess, Stoorworms are big, hungry sea serpents. Your best bet is to sacrifice seven girls to the beast once a week."---
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good opening that introduced the storyline and setting well.
A creative story with a wonderful cast of characters that I really like. I like the old style names.
A nice happy ending.
Spud thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.
Suggestions:
SMILE ~ WRITE ON! BE HAPPY ~ KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.
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Yes, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre. 
A great structure that does make it easier for the reader 
A great job on the dialogue, which does sound specific for its speaker. 
Great, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre. 
The structure and format is fairly easy for the reader. A bit more line spacing and blank lines between longer paragraphs would make it easier for those of us with weak eyes. 
The dialogue does seem appropriate for the speaker. 
Indeed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre. 
Nicely structured, making it easy for the reader. 
A good job with the dialogue that does seem to be specific for the speaker. 
by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre. 
The dialogue does seem appropriate for the speaker. 