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Review of Cowboy  Open in new Window.
Review by Miss Amazing Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem has rhythm. It has a feet stomping beat. It flows pretty well except for one part:
He wears his suits,
And he wears his ties.
He wears boots and jeans,
And will till he dies.

"And will till he dies." would flow better if it were: "And he will till he dies." Just because the other lines were longer

also on :"His homes his ranch," it should be home's not homes

Just a few suggestions. even with them, I really like Cowboy. :)
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Review of Eating Asparagus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)

I like your poem. It is probably what I did when I first tried Asparagus:)
Sometimes it is hard to understand who's who, though.

But it has lots of expressed feelings, you did a great job with that. It's something that all of us feel and can relate too.
Good Job!
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