Poetry is the mirror to ones feeling or ideas so it is neither write nor wrong or at least that is my opinion.
But I can relate to it in a way because most of my poetry will follow the same path as yours. I also like how you dont have it ryming to many people fight to make poetry ryme when it doesn't need to. All in all i like this peice.
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