Capturing. The poem reminds me of someone who longs to be loved, yet is afraid at the same time. Watching from a distance. The person is trapped in a never ending cycle of want. Something they can barely reach as the other goes about their day.
This project is well done. The way it's arranged is great. Love your use of words. Though it's hard to understand for myself. To me it's talking about a girl who wants to write but instead she acts out the words. She watches them come to life in a day dream or perhaps she does them herself. Good job!
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