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Review by R. M. Guitar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Capturing. The poem reminds me of someone who longs to be loved, yet is afraid at the same time. Watching from a distance. The person is trapped in a never ending cycle of want. Something they can barely reach as the other goes about their day.

I like it a lot. Very well written.
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Review of At the Playground  
Review by R. M. Guitar Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This project is well done. The way it's arranged is great. Love your use of words. Though it's hard to understand for myself. To me it's talking about a girl who wants to write but instead she acts out the words. She watches them come to life in a day dream or perhaps she does them herself. Good job!
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