Now THIS is the usual inspirational kind of writing I'm used to reading from you. Beautiful, touching, but with a hint of sadness because you know that Gloom and Despair will spend all their time crying on each other's shoulders.
Fear traveled slowly and cautiously using these possessions - like a lantern to light her way, or, to help her see. Something. That sentence can't just stop right there. Anyway...
This story is another very good one. The other similar story I read by you about a week or so ago (I wish I could recall the title) had other similar, but different characters and somehow seemed just a bit better than this one. I wish I could compare them side by side to better explain what I mean. Nonetheless, you've once again delivered an inspirational and thought-provoking story and I was happy to read it.
Have you considered making these stories into children's books for the 7-12 year old crowd? I just think they'd sell well, especially with some nice drawings to go along with the stories.
Very well written and easy to understand. I would have used a darker green for the questions just so it was easier to read, but I can't see hardly anything without my glasses anyway, so don't go changing it just because I mentioned it. I'm new and haven't got many GPs yet, but I'll pay forward a bit. I like that idea. Kind of what I always tell folks that I've helped, just make sure you help someone else down the road when you're able. And the karmic wheel continued it's eternal revolution across the heavens...
What an appropo title, one that fits quite well with the subject and is repeated in different terms throughout, making this a quick and easy read with a big grin at the end. Well done. Thumbs up!
Spelling, grammar, rhythm and flow are beautiful, the only thing missing is a few more verse. You leave the reader wanting more, but it's not there. Rats!
I'm guessing a few more questions will be added by the time I'm ready to take this survey again. I probably should have waited to fill it out, but I'm sampling everything on the table right now so I won't be able to give a better review until I'm not so wet behind the ears.
Thank you.
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