Hey, this is a nice catchy poem! It seems the speaker is talking about another person, one who he loves, and the other doesn't seem to notice... very emotional undertone to the whole thing. To the casual reader, this may seem like a short, to the point catchy poem. But to the trained eye, the emotional undercurrent shows, and hits the reader right in the heart. Good job.
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