As a Christian, this was just a joy to read. I love to sit in my quiet chair with my coffee and talk to God in my spirit. That is where he talks to us, I feel; in our spirit.
A few more revisits for grammar or punctuation errors are needed if it is a care of yours to have that on point.
Lastly, the Lord is such a gentleman. Sometimes He is quiet when we want him to speak because his silence is part of the learning experience.
Would this have worked without a rainbow of text color? Doubtful!! I'm curious as to whether the color choices were random for certain text or if the color has meaning to the lines they are in. A well deserved win for the contest it was entered in. There's so many questions that I do not even want answered because this was meant to inspire a dialogue. Well done!
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