I REALLY enjoyed this piece! I was disappointed when it ended and found myself wishing that it was a longer short story so that you could have developed each character and went more in depth with the story. I did like that you let the reader infer as to where the journey ended. It also left me wondering why Samantha's boat was chosen to be destroyed... if it was because she was bad, what had the others done? I like selections that make me think, so great job!
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