Brotherlife-2328's (brother2319) Reviews

Brotherlife-2328

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#4859320

Review of Armpits

Review by Brotherlife-2328

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

This is surprisingly not bad.. you did good with using context instead of using the word "armpit" once. I am overall impressed, but nothing I've haven't seen before. Keep working on it, good job.

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Review of Under your armpit

Review by Brotherlife-2328

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (1.0)

I find the premise interesting, but this isn’t a good representation of it. It’s about armpits, but it doesn’t even talk about it. Now charging people to read this is honestly pathetic. It’s not what it says it is, and this isn’t worth the price. Honestly dissatisfied and disappointed…

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Review of Torture Stinks

Review by Brotherlife-2328

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

This is the most creative, and grotesque story ever! I love the versatility. However, people didn’t follow the “no sexual stuff” rule, so check on that. I’M NOT A ARMPIT FETISH, but I love the detail and grossness of the stories/pathways YOU, NOT ANYONE ELSE, ONLY YOU created! It’s gross, and brotherhood accurate. It’s perfected the balance between grossness, brotherhood, and story in one! Keep making armpit stories (it’s the only good thing, the rest is, just nothing but sex)! Make a WHOLE new interactive chapter, but only brothers doing armpit shenanigans. Make it so NO ONE can edit without permission, so they can’t ruin the art you PERFECTED! GREAT JOB OVERALL, JUST GET RID OF THE CHAPTERS/PATHWAYS THAT AREN’T YOURS!

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#4855231

Review of Yesterday's Rainbow

Review by Brotherlife-2328

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (2.5)

I see that you are a follower of God, the poem is not the best though. Rhyme and it will look better. I am a Christian, and I you my friend are brave for spreading the truth, now if you will spread this:

“For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son [Jesus Christ], that whoever believes in Him should not perish, but have everlasting life.” – John 3:16

That verse will bring people to God. God bless, and keep practicing!