Hi Kiara, I read this a few times..Can certainly relate to some of those feelings! I like the prose, the rhythm, If I understand correctly, the feelings of being inadequate are strong here, As we grow and age we learn fast to just please ourselves, the rest do not matter. If you are a student I understand that is hard, but cuts deep none the same. Some of these feeling we carry all our lives and just try to grow from them! I like this, it is deep, it is full of emotion! Looking forward to reading more of your portfolio! Keep on writing!!!
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