hahaha i loved this as you can see it actually made me giggle to myself.
It was humorous and well written and nothing cliche about it.
and also the rhyme flowed very well.
I like your poetry, it is fun to read and original!
Keep writing, for sure! :)
I like this poem and what it is saying
but the rhyming pattern isn't flowing well with me.
i don't know maybe it's jsut my perference, but it was kind of distracting and choppy and it took my attetnion away from what you were trying to say.
Otherwise though, i liked it!
Keep on writing. :)
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