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Melancholy Scribblings

Found in a notebook dated 1991. Apparently I was depressed over my non-existent love life.

A heart falls into darkness as the light slowly fades away.

The Arithmetic of Stillness

Sometimes, it’s best to stop and enjoy the tiny pleasures of life

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Thoughts destined to be washed away by the tides of life.

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Weeping Willow
An elf attempting to hide her identity and the unlikely chance of belonging.

An Indian citizen
A child aim is to change there environment like here dream

BY ONLINE AUTHORS

The Arithmetic of Stillness
Sometimes, it’s best to stop and enjoy the tiny pleasures of life

Melancholy Scribblings
Found in a notebook dated 1991. Apparently I was depressed over my non-existent love life.

Shadowbound
A heart falls into darkness as the light slowly fades away.

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Review of The death of a fairy tale.

Review by Beth Zisman

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Hi Tigerlily - this is fantastic, made me want to cry. I really liked how you made it a fairytale which really highlighted your devastation at losing something a child believes in 100%. I'm so sorry for your loss, I can't imagine how much it must have hurt but this poem really conveyed your suffering.

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