Fantastic! I really enjoyed this story. The narration was excellent. I don't quite understand the obsession with eight and a half million dollars. Was it that she just happened to get the exact amount she had dreamed of? Or did those dreams in the beginning actually happen after earning the money? I suppose that may be intentional, nevertheless It's difficult to tell. Great work!
Write On,
Dave
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