What you wrote looks like you have an active mind. A bit about
Christianity has captured me, for I am a Christian. I like how you have
also included poetry; Good imagination
You are right about boys not having to express themselves. I remember wanting my mom to hug me and pay attention to my sorrows. Of course, girls need attention also. Some are misunderstood. All children, girls and boys need loving care.
I believe you wrote the essay, and you made every creative decision, directed every element, and you can defend every choice, and Al only did the typing.
Your essay is helping me with how to write. I have written a lot of sex stories now, and I have decided to work on science fiction. I'm working on the story and will have Al type it. Thanks for expressing yourself in this essay. You have also given me inspiration to do my own writing...
I gather this story takes place after the nuclear war. You had captured my interest in your story right from the beginning to the end. I gather that in the end, Rowan and Tess die because of the lack of oxygen and water. Have you got more stories on here? If not, you should continue writing, maybe even a novel.
I heard those things about St. Patrick a while ago and wondered if it was true. I believe he talked about God and Jesus in Ireland. I am pleased how God has influenced your life.
I know at the age of 7 I was raped by my Foster Father for a week I begged to go baaack ato the orphange and it came true and for some reason I was on my knees by my bed in the orphanage and prayuing and when I opened my eyes a bright lit person was standing in front of me and I took it for granted theyo were my guardian, ANGEL.
Yes, I believe Jesus went to the cross for our sins, rising the third day. He is the Son of God the Son The Father, and the Holy Spirit in one I am reading all your entries about God .
It took me until 1993 to quit with the help of God. I smoked my last cigarette on April 7th and said to God let this be my last I still had a full pack of tobacco and papers, and said after i smoked Thanks to you, God, I am a non-smoker and never smoked again.