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Review of Jasmine  
Review by bdbert Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)
This was an excellent story. You captured my attention in the beginning of the introduction and never cause me to loose sight of what you were trying to tell. I like stories like this one. I hoping at the end she had returned to you and continued to get help. It is so much mental illnesses today and this is one of the complicated ones.
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Review by bdbert Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)
I just read your story. It kept me suspense. I like the way it ended being that it was a short detective story. I am impressed how you kept the dialogue going between the detective and the killer (the lawyer's wife). This could be setup as a play with just two characters. Excellent job.
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