Very interesting poem, I did not expect the end result which means you kept your ending possiblites wide open. I enjoy free verse myself and enjoy this poem. Although I did not like the simplicity of rhyming teen with nicotine, as there is no change of end rhyming. Other then that i enjoyed the poem,
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