Wow! That was an amazing piece! My heart was pounding as I read further and further through the dream absolutely captivated by the descriptions. I could feel the cool air, hear the sounds of your feet on the ice, and then visualize the faces! That gave me chills! Very, very good writing. I'm also very impressed with your interpretation of what Hell is and what it will be for those who make the wrong choice. You did a great job on this one!
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