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Review of Just Friends  
Review by augustday Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)
I've shown you the truth that lies inside, where all this pain and love collide.

Sorry, I haven't figured out where the font color, italicize, bold, etc stuff is yet.
But that line from you -- is gorgeous.

The whole piece is achingly beautiful, as it so perfectly combines poem & storytelling so skillfully together. And it's a story most everyone can relate to-- being on your side of the divide --on the outside of love not allowed to bloom.

You captured the experience, the emotion, the pain of lost love, so truthfully.

This is a wonderful, but sorrowful piece.

Very well done.

It's too bad you had to experience it, though!
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