Hello, and good morning to you! Your poem, "I'm An Angel, You're An Angel" popped up on the Read and Review Section. I am not a professional reviewer, but what I can offer is my feedback on how your poem made me feel as I was reading it.
Your poem speaks volumes to me. I liked the part where you stated, "Besides talking bold, brash, hearty, We must actually perform soulful, honest work In somewhat lengthy duration In our blessed, jubilant social lives - Associating our own guilt in those activities Would surely spell imminent ruin For our important efforts, And alert everyone of our subconscious, And highly deleterious ways. Therefore, in a friendly, positive way, We are truly angels. You and I, Despite gravitating toward useless, But hearty and meaningful, Trash talk", really resonated with me, it truly shows that no matter where we are in life, that we are truly angels in our own right.
The way it sounds to me is that, even though we are doing some trash talk, it means that through all of our efforts, we are still truly angels. Sometimes, it's fun to talk that way to someone that we love, as long as it's not hurtful to them. I don't think that's meant to be shared with other people. This would mean that other people may get the wrong impression and get ideas into their own heads that they can talk that way to you too. Some things are just meant to keep secret.
I encourage you to keep up with your writing. I enjoyed reading this. We are not perfect. We are all unique. There are certain things that aren't meant for others to share. It should be kept between you and the one you love. Did I get this right? I truly agree with you, in that, in our own way, all of us are angels.
My hope for you is to have a miracle of blessings in good health, good friendships, good memories, good thoughts, love, and much happiness throughout your lifetime.
Have a nice day. I hope my review has helped you.
Anna Marie Carlson
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