I am not really sure about the begining of this poem that first paragraph.. but then all of a sudden it takes off and flows so smoothly..and delivers a clear message about no matter who are or where you come from drugs will bring you down and kill ... sad but so true... good job .. keep writing I can't wait to read more of your work..
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