the 5th line up throughs me. What is "rusg"? I really like your poem. You have caught the essence of that hope that thee ae better things to come for this couple. Nice job.
Amy Kate
This is just an excellent poem and so true to life. I really like the way you sentences flow together. It is like an easy lope of reality . Nice job.
Amy Kate
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