This is a very interesting story. Long, and farly good detailed descriptions. What are insurgents though? I'm a bit confused by that, but other than that, I like it. ^_^ I hope that man is ok though. A bloody nose, and a gun pointing at him. >< Oh, I should go find the first story, may make more sense to me then :P Good writing skills though ^_^
This is a cute story, or poem, or whatever it is. Plus, I love Harry Potter, so that's a bonus right there. xD It makes me think of lonely homeless people who need help. Like, the Outsiders, or something similar. xD