Thank you for sharing your beautifully written story. The term that came to my mind as I was reading this was 'wistful' because the narrator longed for a life that stubbornly would not materialize, and so was prompted to leave that longing behind and find the life intended for them.
Very well done and congratulations on the win!
Allen
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