I love this story! I think it is brilliant. I can really see parents reading this to their children on Christmas Eve. It's an original story that no one has heard before, which is great, and the moral of it is great too. It just fits in perfectly with a book of Christmas stories. I hope to see this published one day. I am impressed. Good work!
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