Nice piece. I really liked it. The idea of young guys getting detained for prank is hilarious. Especially for the circumstance that you put them into. I think that this was a great piece to enter into a contest and it is also great considering the restrictions of the contest. Good job.
This was a great piece. I liked how you were able to give the full experience of it without dragging out the details too badly. The imagery was good and everything was perfectly in order. One thing that I would suggest is maybe adding more facial imagery. Besides that it was perfect.
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