Bullet,
Congrats. This is a gripping revelation indeed. It's slippery, fast and engaging. I'd have loved to see it more decked up with small paragraphs, some hanging sentences, some revealing confrontations through dialogues between the man and his alter ego. Enough sparks are there and I feel if given some space for them, they'd surely fly with us as regular passengers.
Regards
Akash
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