Athena Grace's (ahoyle) Reviews

Athena Grace

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13 Public Reviews Given

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#3369060

Review of Vacation

Review by Athena Grace

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)

I would have liked to see more description of the time spent together. It also seemed hard to read. The flow and rhythm seemed to be lacking a little. All together it was good. Enjoyable. Keep on writing!!

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#3366212

Review of Tranquility Interupted

Review by Athena Grace

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Very nice flow to the story. I love the concept of the nagging wife. Even in death she gives him no peace.

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Review of Flowers for My Sweetheart

Review by Athena Grace

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Loved this piece. You can just feel the love oozing from it. Thanks so much for sharing.

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#3366209

Review of I Think of Heaven

Review by Athena Grace

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

I thought the visualization of your words was great. I followed your path the whole step of the way. Very nice.

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#3363686

Review of Just a Fairytale

Review by Athena Grace

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Really loved this poem. The whole fairytale theme is great.

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Review of Her Tears

Review by Athena Grace

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Great thinking piece.