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Review by acorngirl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)
That was very beautiful. I have always been a big fan of the Tudor royalty. Your descriptions are picturesque. Your dialogue is natural and fitting for what she would say. This was very, very well written. Thank you for sharing.
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Review by acorngirl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)
You have a wonderful ability to create a descriptive scene. Beautifully written. I could see the graveyard so distinctly in my mind as I read it. Be careful with verb tense. A couple of shifts between present and past tense and I had trouble telling where I was in the story. Still it is very well written.
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