I just read a short story by Elmore Leonard that I believed had too much foreshadowing. Too much foreshadowing can weaken the conclusion, especially if the conclusion is supposed to be a surprise. That’s what I was thinking, and that’s what I was going to report to the ELMORE LEONARD SOCIETY, and then I decided not to argue with Elmore Leonard about anything ever, without exception. And that's that... |
Well, he's dead. Lived a long life. He would've turned 100 this year. |
I think I'm missing something. I entered the Quotation Inspiration contest, and know I did that right, but I can't find the page that shows all the other contestants. I don't know if this is on purpose or I am just getting old. In my day we didn't have any of these newfangled...ah, never mind. Am I missing something? {PLEASE BE GENTLE} |
I get concerned when I enter (I worry too much ![]() ![]() When results are posted the top 3 winners are always mentioned; but at times, I've seen a list of all who have entered including those disqualified (usually forget to enter word count, line count, edited after due date [advice... do not touch it except to look at it], not new, missed deadline). I'm not happy with mine "The Road to Ali" ![]() |
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I just had a lightbulb appear over my head. Poof. Out of nowhere. Here it is: The key to writing well is having patience with yourself. You're welcome. |
Dave's trying to catch up ![]() |
I love my own writing. Sometimes I think this is a curse, and sometimes I think it’s a blessing. It’s a curse when I send a short story to one of my relatives or friends thinking it might induce a hometown tickertape parade of some kind, and I get back, “I enjoyed your short story.” And that will be the last it is spoken of. |
I often write thinking about someone (almost like a talisman) or to honor them. I've had mixed results: perplexed, thrilled, reduced to tears... "Frames [#8 Lorin]" ![]() ![]() ![]() |
I recently read an article from a famous author who said, “Never send your stories to your friends or families.” Her reasoning was that most of them won’t care. I think I will try to follow that advice, but then when I think about all the wisdom and insight to life I’m denying them, well... it breaks my heart is what it does. |
I've just edited a Camp story I wrote and I'm hoping for input on how to improve it.
Thank you, Winchester Jones |
I just wrote a Cramp story, and no one has commented. I'm hoping somebody will read it and give me some ideas for improvement.
Thanx, Winchester Jones |
Ouch. I will say that I think "Cottage Cheese" would make a better title. That said... the sadness of the moment felt realistic. Sometimes one faces what one has to face. Kudos to Helen. I'm not a story teller. I wrote a poem to the same prompt. You featured a dog; me, a cat. |
Of note- Potomac Review isn't open for new submissions until January - and they don't yet pay for submissions other than by free copy of the mag. so..... here's a link from my search for "submission guidelines for crime/mystery stories" https://internationalwriterscollective.com/where-to-submit-mystery-thriller-and-... First one listed - Ellery Queen Mystery Mag, pays about $75 per the writers' guidelines (found under "The Crime Scene" tab) Good Luck! |