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Diane

Sep 24, 2017 at 1:04pm • Edited

I have just posted a brand-new story:
Forging the Future (chapters 1-2).
The family that fakes together stays together
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The post contains the first two chapters, and I would be grateful for review: What are your impressions, what works, what doesn't work, what would you like to know about the characters

Thanks

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ruwth

Sep 24, 2017 at 2:07pm

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(Delete 123117) A Forger's Living Legacy (13+)

Rick comes home to his vault of forgeries, but he knows he is being followed.

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Diane

Sep 3, 2017 at 11:21am • Edited

I've just added a new item to my portfolio:

Where Has Our North Star Gone? (E)

A family struggles to reorient their lives after their mother dies

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Please take a look and offer constructive comments

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Diane

Sep 3, 2017 at 10:50am

I've just edited an item in my portfolio:

Altered Trajectories, Chapter 1 (E)

A solar eclipse has lasting effects on a woman who emerges with the power of an Empathion

Based on other reviews I have updated this story enough to change some of the content, including introducing the power of an Empathion

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