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| I am working on a script about EMT's and Paramedics. I was a Paramedic for over 20 years. Each call in the script will be real, from my list of calls, and they are all real with raw emotion. Please read the first four scenes that are in my portfolio and let me know what you think. |
| I am writing a script about EMTs and Medics. I would love some feed back. This is the first time I am attempting to write a script. |
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There is an active screenwriters' group on the site. Schnujo -- Join Item 2109126 can give you a good steer.
I don't know enough about screenplays to review your work at this early stage. I do like the elements in your piece, and I cherish a thoroughgoing respect for life on the page.
This is definitely something that you should do. I look forward to the read.