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Shed the shackles of a biological legacy  (18+)
How far can we as a civilization advance shackled to the whims of our biological past.
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The Short Term Loan  (E)
Short term loan of ones body.
, and small changes to the story and punctuation's.
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The Short Term Loan  (E)
Short term loan of ones body.
and made small changes in story and punctuation's.
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Abdication  (E)
Two brothers begin to iron out their new reality after their fathers death.
I missed an error which clearly had to be confusing. Hopeful now, it’s a smoother read.
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The Redemption of Darryl's Shadow  (18+)
The youngest finds way to redeem himself at the end by ending one life and saving a life.
Minor changes.
Writing on my break.
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 The Tire Change.  (18+)
A young woman and her child are closer to trouble than they realize. A Chiller.

Title: The Tire Change.

Story Inspired by a contest prompt.

Critique invited.
Since I've been on Writing.com I have written many mostly short stories and have to date been the winner of Five writing competitions. I've received reviews, comments advice and support in the improving of my skills in both storytelling as well as a writer.
I take two of the educational classes, among the many, that are offered.
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