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Hi all,

As you all know, I have asked if anyone would like to review my dark fantasy story. Here is the prologue chapter of the story, and I will put the rest up once finished.
 
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When Darkness Triumphs: The prologue  (E)
A war between two anicient armies...
Hope you all have a good day.
Best wishes,
Kadie
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Hi all!

I’m looking for reviews on my dark fantasy story. This family-themed work of fiction is told in multiple chapters. With honest feedback, primarily focusing on the plot, characters, pacing, and world-building aspects, I can address the most glaring issues, and fix parts that need the most attention.

Ideally, you could respond to each chapter as it is published, but you are welcome to write to us at any time. I welcome suggestions, critiques, or general thoughts.

Let me know if you’d like me to send the chapters to you directly so that the rest is easy for you to read. Thanks so much!

Kadie
Is this the chapter you are talking about?
 
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The prologue chapter of my story  (E)
Dark stranger, danger, mystery, pursuit.
I would welcome the distraction of reading someone else's work as I slog through final proofreading of the last 5 books of my 12 book series. My brain is seizing up!
Ha! Ha! Ha! 😀😀😀😀!
Proofreaders are like special angels.
I had 8 of them. I need to give back!
I Heart My Sox Author Icon - No it is not, that was from another story I wrote...I will add on the story that I am asking to be reviewed
New story. Feedback accepted "Elanor" 
I've created a new story "Scene writing." .
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