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I'm posting the completed draft of my 38,400-word novella My Left Temporal Lobe. Looking for two beta readers to read the entire text and critique chapters and the manuscript as a whole. Don't worry about grammar or punctuation. Looking for characterization, POV, descriptive writing, pacing, clarity, what you like, what doesn't work. 3500 points to each of two beta readers. Currently figuring out how to make it double-spaced and larger text. Please message me if you have questions.

The novella is a memoir about how a Near Death Experience changes the life of Lisa Jones for the better, even though it unmasks underlying epilepsy.
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I have two new chapters up of My Left Temporal Lobe, offering 400 points for reviews with ratings. #2127800 and #2127844. This is a memoir about how a Near Death Experience changed my life. Looking for reviews of all chapters posted. Appreciate the feedback!
Hi. I'm new here and I go by Cleo. I'm working on a memoir with a working title of My Left Temporal Lobe. It's about how a near death experience and epilepsy changed my life. I would appreciate any critiques or feedback I can get, and look forward to critiquing others' work.
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