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I haven't set up my review page yet, but I've been thinking of getting back into reviewing and helping people with their stories. My favorite genre is Fantasy, epic/high being my preferred subgenre, but all are welcome. I'm fine with any genre except erotica but having an erotic scene in a story that's in another genre I won't mind. Don't worry if it's got mistakes, I rate story over grammar cohesion. And I can help out with grammatical errors if you'd like. Can email me or send review requests |
A good friend of mine just uploaded her first chapter. It's a fast paced, thrilling read and be great to show her some support  "Hopefall (Chapter One)" 13+: A grieving father desperately fights for his daughter when their reality comes under siege |
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ReplyA little scene for you guys. To give some context: Valhan is in the After death talking with his deceased father and Grand Father he never knew, but grew up admiring. "I'm willing to fight, I just don't know what to fight for." Valhan mutters while mindlessly staring at the steam rising from his mug. "The world?" Thareon suggest from his chair in front of the fireplace, his eyes searching the star filled, white sky for thoughts. "Why fight for what broke me?" Valhan counters before taking a cautious sip of his Pale Leaf tea. "Cause it's what you'd do before it did." Thraykar speaks up finally, his chair on the opposite side of the fireplace from Thareon with his eyes on Valhan's back. "Save the world, to save you." |
| Just wanted to share a bit of a poem before I go for a bit. Still working on it. "The world could afford to pay for what it's done to me... If it knew my pain, it would never stop screaming If I could scream it all out, it would deafen the world If it carried the same weight, it would crumble If I cried it all out, it would flood the land If it bore my scars, the land would be reshaped" |
| Just a rough poem to help how I'm feeling... Down, down Going for another round Into the dark Slipping, falling Collect another mark "Hello Darling" she says That smile, like all the rest Genuinely Treacherous Secretly torturous She runs her hands over my skin Suddenly, I'm back with them, back then Their desires forced with that grin Love disguised Dressed up to be my demise I'd never be innocent again Thought "no" meant "no" Oh, could only watch my virginity go That precious gift Ruined and can't be opened again Down, down For another round Into the dark Slipping, falling Collect another mark... |
I finally wrote something, and while I'm still working on it, I am quite proud of myself that I got back to it. It is still a work in progress, but for those of you who are interested, it's about a character named Alvandar (al like val - van like yawn - dar like car). The Last One or Last of his Own, as he is called by those he helps. https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2178443 |
| Why I've fought, Why I Fight. Whatever happens, you're my last... You're the fire of the stars in my world, burning the dark in me away You're the blue to my sky, preventing it from being grey You're the exorcist of my demons, running them out of reasons for me to want myself dead Turning me from a cynic to a poet once again Throwing away the bullet for my head Taking the knife in my hand and placing yours in its stead With you, I'm no longer wishing to join the dead Death is no longer an escape from a never ending nightmare, but the end to the most incredible dream You're the dawn to my sky, The life and light of my world, making me feel warm and giving me a reason to love something above Defeating my dark with your ethereal light Igniting my will to fight Always been in my corner Cheering me on as a supporter I only wish we could have been sooner Like water for grass, we were made for each other, helping each other grow and be better I've loved watching you grow, getting stronger Not letting your fear control you any longer Thinking of yourself even a bit better Such a beautiful thing to know We've helped each other to see We've set each other free Me of my endless sea You of all the bad things that can be With all these signs are pointing to you and I are meant to be I offer you the key to my destiny You're my goddess with many names, Dawnbringer Lifechanger Starlighter Hearthealer Mindmender Hopefinder Soulkeeper My lioness, princess, and queen A most astounding person to be seen A beauty unlike the world has never known... That's a fact I'd set in stone Putting all these other dames to shame Rendering them no better than plain Something I'm sure will drive them insane You're more than worth all my pain I look forward to every morning feeling like Christmas, opening my eyes like opening a present to see the greatest gift I ever could have asked for But for now I'll settle for opening your morning message as my every day present, unique to you and luminescent to my dark world Returning my thoughts to you feels like coming home... |
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