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Written in response to a friend saying my poems aren't "descriptive enough." |
Rain of the Soul Don't do it, I thought Why do you have to do that? Why? I questioned, as I watched the drop drip down and die. My window streaked with the last moments of their lives. I watched, and mourned, the death of each one as if it were my own. Maybe it was, and maybe it wasn't. Poor things. I bet they thought that no one cares… like me. But that's the difference between us, the Raindrops and I; for they will be reborn as Dew, while I'll just die. Then I realized that I felt the presence of just one. One that somehow snuck past that gateway between our worlds, made only of glass. As I looked in the mirror, I realized I could see that one had snuck in... and attached itself to me. Why me? Am I worthy of your grace? Do you deserve to wither and die on such a lonely face? No. I decided and went to wipe it away, only to realize I wanted it to stay. |