The Darkness Comes

All from HS creative writing class. Opinions please!

From where it has been night all day
The darkness comes
From the demons who live beneath
The darkness comes
From those who follow in his ways
The darkness comes
from despair and chaos
rage and hatred
jealousy and greed
The darkness comes
From those who cannot see the Light
The darkness comes
And in the end the darkness will vanish
Then,
for eternity,
the Light will justly reign.