Revolving Rings Of Love

i wrote this for a girl i like. She liked it, so it was mission accomplished :D

Revolving Rings of Love

I feel like Saturn, closed in your slowly revolving
Rings of love.

I feel like Mars, standing upon the summit of Olympus Mons,
Yet still not high enough to touch your heart.

I feel like Neptune, drowning with a smile on my face, looking up at the sun through the waves, knowing I’ll be saved by you.

I feel like Venus, lifted up on the volcano, shrouded by the warmth and closeness I feel in you around me.

I feel like Jupiter, its red eye throbbing like my heart, my head swirling.

I feel like Mercury, so close to your sun, heated by your shining rays.

I feel

I feel like I love you.