Run Away

A sad poem that I'm in the process of turning into a song (rate and/or review please)

Pathetic
I'm so pathetic
How mad, how tense, how lost I am!
How I wish I were free from this prison
To live, to experience

Let me see, world, let me see
Let me go, world, let me go
Set me free, world, set me free
I want to know, world, let me go

Pour more poison down my throat
Feed me all your lies
Stab me in the back again
You will never see me cry

How hard it is to answer,
When you cover my eyes and shake me
How hard it is to speak to you,
When you control my life, suffocate me
My life is slipping away
Why do you torture me?
Why can’t you hear me?

Let me see, world, let me see
Let me go, world, let me go
Set me free, world, set me free
I want to know, world, let me go

Pour more poison down my throat
Feed me all your lies
Stab me in the back again
You will never see me cry

I'm leaving
I'm going
I'm never coming back
I'm broken
Hurting
My pride is all I've got
Run away

Let me see, world, let me see
Let me go, world, let me go
Set me free, world, set me free
I want to know, world, let me go